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Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

Claudius Whalefist VII — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 14:05:15 -0000

Long sentences are not bad grammar. They are just detailed and complex. However using complex modifying phrases as part of parallel structure is difficult and often confusing; the difficulty of writing a fluent and correct parallel is directly related to the size of the parallel.

Probably the easiest way to fix it is to change it from "so many poorly structured sentences that lead to ambiguity of meaning, so many "small" mistakes, such a lack of proper capitalization, missing or redundant punctuation, word misuse and run-on sentences that lose connection with their initial point," to:

"so many poorly structured sentences that lead to ambiguity of meaning, so many "small" mistakes and so much improper capitalization that acts to distract the reader, so many missing or redundant punctuation marks that hamper fluency, so much word misuse which undermines the writer's credibility, and so many run-on sentences that lose connection with their initial point"

However this sentence is still long, and should be split into a topic sentence and several explanation sentences instead of a 2 sentence paragraph.

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

chop — Tue, 14 Apr 2009 09:30:53 -0000

wadever man!.............................

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sire john mcfreson — Tue, 14 Apr 2009 09:29:23 -0000

wad the hell???wads up wid you man? who the hack dare abt his spelling?

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Sam — Wed, 25 Mar 2009 14:12:47 -0000

well played, hahaha

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Sam — Wed, 25 Mar 2009 14:12:33 -0000

joseph harris IS a dick. no seriously, his head is shaped like a dick... sounds like one too...

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roflcopter — Fri, 19 Dec 2008 01:44:17 -0000

A really long sentence would include, "This entry contains so many poorly structured sentences that lead to ambiguity of meaning, so many "small" mistakes, such a lack of proper capitalization, missing or redundant punctuation, word misuse and run-on sentences that lose connection with their initial point, that the reader wonders if the writer truly understands the subject or is simply parroting set phrases." lol

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

something like a nick name — Mon, 13 Oct 2008 19:08:23 -0000

I think 5 years max, and we'll get even better than that, don't really like the design, could be smoother... and what this fucking key ring doing on it? is going to be cool in 5 years? It just doesn't look convenient...

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

kill switch — Thu, 25 Sep 2008 10:33:15 -0000

well it wud be gud to c dis ph... as ur saying... dat it wud be in de pockets ...but in country like india... it wud in a pockets of only few 1ce's who wud be buying dat....
mail me more bout dis concept ... if possible...

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

mobly phones geek :D — Fri, 12 Sep 2008 08:45:25 -0000

well harris such on that bitch waaahhoooooo:)

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lori — Thu, 14 Aug 2008 22:55:21 -0000

This Fone Is The Biz Lol

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Symbiotes_021 — Thu, 29 May 2008 00:35:34 -0000

Wauuu.. I can see the future now... Really neat technology they (NOKIA) got there.

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Kartik Shashank — Tue, 15 Apr 2008 11:33:10 -0000

Hello people... It is really nice to see so many people supporting the right person. Infact, if your words are able to convey your ideas in any way, there is no point crying for the grammatical correctness.

Well, now I just want to talk about the phone.
1) People, I really want to know, why specifically some of you have talked of 7 years.
2) A friend of mine just told me that such CONCEPT phones are just meant to show the abilities of the company, and do not assure to come to existence in the near future. Is that really true?

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

Bryan Duke — Mon, 14 Apr 2008 23:47:19 -0000

Nice post, thankyou.

I'd also like to add that it was obvious the poster did not have english as his first language, so the post by Jo Harris is condenscending in tone despite his disclaimer at the beginning.

Anyone with a strong grasp of english like Jo could have identified this so Jo's failure to do so probably highlights some sort of isolation from the world either physically or emotionally.

Be nice Jo. You are not your father.

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

Pieter — Mon, 24 Mar 2008 07:42:10 -0000

In the future we will have robots that touch these things for us. As a bonus they will check everything we write as well. No more dangling participles, terrible grammar or embarrassing spelling mistakes. The robots will get the blame for all our shortcomings. Mr Harris is probably a robot just like that and he morphs into other things like a dickhead, a wanker and even a loser. I morph too from loyal supporter into a vicious bitch. I am sendinng him a glitter bomb. That stuff sticks to the skin forever. He is a marked man.
I am now officially sick of this entire topic. Go to hell Harris. Outta here.............

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

Cool Acid — Mon, 24 Mar 2008 02:41:53 -0000

Hahaha... leave John Harris alone... it's not his fault to be a dick. Also, people like us, not-english-speakers need that kind of "wise" critic to improve our english.
Cool concept... but I think it'll happen in more than 7 years. And... why the fuck do you wanna know if things are clean in a microscopic level? You'll end up not eating anything and stop touching things because you will just get so paranoid about the bacterias and stuff that you will live terrified the rest of your high-tech-nano-life.

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Pieter — Sun, 23 Mar 2008 06:48:56 -0000

Attention Mr Joseph Harris. I have contacted the Gay Mafia to seek out this butcher of our sacred language and they are going to forcibly redecorate his or her apartment in last years colours and add some shag carpet and place drinks on the coffee table without coasters. Resistance will be met with a vicious attack with teasing combs and nail files. This should teach this barbarian to stay away from English and possibly start going out to gay bars... Revenge shal be ours Mr Harris.
May God, who is an Englishman after all bless you and give you the strength to continue this just quest to preserve the queen's English. Millions everywhere love you now and I shall name my next Barbie doll in your honour.
Your servant and grateful admirer, Pieter

Kissy kissy..... hugsie wugsie.....

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

issac — Sun, 23 Mar 2008 02:47:35 -0000

John Harris
is a DICK!!

nice article!

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sam — Sun, 23 Mar 2008 02:42:26 -0000

this concept looks interesting
cool gadget and a must have
oh and harris PISS OFF!!
you sound like my professor
you wanker!

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

saikaku — Sat, 22 Mar 2008 21:42:59 -0000

Vineet, I totally agree with your first post. This is making me ROFL.

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

rajeev — Sun, 16 Mar 2008 06:33:48 -0000

hi its amazing concept. i think i should have this, so please let me know when its going to be available with price tag. also send the complete specifications of nokia morph

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

Harshil Zaveri — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 10:09:22 -0000

Wonderful article!

I found the link to the official morph page on Nokia.com

http://www.nokia.com/A4852062

Hard to imagine how fast technology is evolving!

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

Vineet — Sun, 09 Mar 2008 00:39:17 -0000

Does an I-mac automatically make people into pretentious losers who behave like a$$holes to everyone else?

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

Robert — Sat, 08 Mar 2008 22:04:09 -0000

Mr. Harris,

Avoid writing in the passive voice and you will become a good writer. Be direct and to the point, man. Don't pussy foot around with words. Learn to be effective. This is the Internet. Web 2.0 is here. Get with it or be silent!

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

Nicholas Francis — Mon, 03 Mar 2008 10:57:26 -0000

hey Mr.Joseph harris, I guess u need to go back to english Teacher to learn to read better"english".. Or may be becoz ur spending too much time on the internet that may have damaged ur eyes, which makes u read badly(do chk a doctor).Come on Mr.Harris, Learn to appreciate talent, i think ur jealous of Nasir.. so ur trying to bring his fame down by writing such Stupid comments.. which will never happen.

Re: Morph: Nokia’s revolutionary concept phone

Vineet — Sun, 02 Mar 2008 10:18:48 -0000

ROFL. I stumbled here and I already knew about the nokia phone. But watching you guys crap on Joseph "delusions of grandeur" Harris is totally funny. Thumbs up.